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A extra long chapter for those who have been enjoying this story. Thanks to Fire-Cooking and Teenage-Oddball for reviewing!
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Another brilliant chapter! The song really set the mood for me, it fits so well. I wouldn't mind more of these incorporated into your story, I know I have particular songs that I find relate to a chapter or can imagine the characters singing in a musical theatre sort of way.
I still admire the way that James has a conscience of his own. I can't help but think that the way that James openly talks to his friends after a brawl like that is going to get noticed, and said companions are going to get threatened. But then again, I don't know what you have planned for this, and I'm still eager to read more.
There's nothing much else to say that I haven't already said before but keep up the fantastic work and don't keep me in suspense! I like how you update regularly, and I think that's because you love writing this story and that's the best reason to keep writing!
I still admire the way that James has a conscience of his own. I can't help but think that the way that James openly talks to his friends after a brawl like that is going to get noticed, and said companions are going to get threatened. But then again, I don't know what you have planned for this, and I'm still eager to read more.
There's nothing much else to say that I haven't already said before but keep up the fantastic work and don't keep me in suspense! I like how you update regularly, and I think that's because you love writing this story and that's the best reason to keep writing!